Thanks a lot for your efforts, Dan.
If you think it would help, you could also put your draft on the Geeklog Wiki, e.g. for collaboration or public review.
No need to repeat the link. Anyway, please avoid deletion by respecting the cite web template. This means using the publisher parameter (usually domain.com without www, e.g. publisher=domian.com) and using consensual en wiki dates (yyyy-mm-dd). I also think not even one reference has a date (as opposed to accessdate). Are they really all unknown? Thanks for all the work.
I promise to personally undo the warning as soon as publisher= is used.